2008年11月20日雅思A类作文解析

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小作文是2个bar图。有或没电视在bedroom，use 电脑对children的成绩的影响。
　　大作文是：As we know，international travel has become cheaper, more and more countries open their doors and more tourists go abroad for traveling.
　　Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
　　今天的小作文波澜不惊，没有特别大的变化，从此也告诉我们真的是要把真题弄熟悉，类似的谈到小孩学习的题目出得非常多，各位可以在我的专栏上仔细看看。
　　大作文也属于很有特点的题目，从归类上来说，这个文章属于很常规的题目，可以归在文化交流这一类，那么这类文章如果考到，要如何入手呢？我们的思路可以这样展开：
　　首先，文化包括语言，风俗，宗教和节日。我们可以挑其中的两个到三个方面去写。可以写国际旅游会因为文化的不同而造成冲突。优点可以写促进文化交流。
　　其次，可以写国际旅游的经济因素，如当地人会敲诈或者收比正常更高的费用，造成冲突。优点可以写促进经济发展。
　　上面的思路也可以只写文化交流或者经济交流，也都可以优缺点都写。下面给出两个结构，供大家参考：
　　A. 文化+经济
　　1. 简述题目，改写题目，说明这个问题优缺点并存
　　2. 从文化角度去说明国际旅游的优点，有助于不同文化的交流，举例可以举语言教育的进步，如雅思本身就是一种语言交流的例子；也可以讲旅游使得不同的节日得以传播，例如春节和圣诞的传播。缺点可以说国际旅游使得某些弱势文化趋于消失，例如某些人很少的民族趋向于灭亡，旅游带来强势文化会加剧这一进程。（注意，重点在于讲事实，而不是去过多评论这些现象本身。）
　　3. 从经济角度去说明国际旅游带来的优点在于促进旅游目的地的经济发展，也可以促进旅游出发国的消费，促进全球经济的交流和进步。缺点可以说会使得某些已经非常落后的经济被外来的经济所同化和吞噬。
　　4. 总结说明国际旅游的优缺点并存而且很多时候确定也不容忽视，但是国际旅游作为无烟行业的优势不容忽视。
　　B 文化
　　1.说明文化的内涵，改写题目，点出优缺点并存的事实。
　　2.语言交流和国际旅游的关系，某些语言可能会消亡。
　　3.宗教，生活方式的交流也有赖于国际旅游的进步，但是不同的生活方式和风俗也可能带来巨大的冲突。
　　4.总结，说明优点多于缺点，加强交流和教育可以减少缺点而增加优点。
　　下面用A套路来写一篇文章，给大家参考，也可以参考新东方写作教程的第164页。
　　As we know，international travel has become cheaper, more and more countries open their doors and more tourists go abroad for traveling.
　　Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
　　With the tremendous thriving and growth of both economy and cultural diversity, international travel has already jumped onto the level of the leading industries. Many would argue that its advantages have already dispersed disadvantages, and many others negate this view.
　　The advantages from international travel are multifarious and prevalent. As we can see in many metropolis, people with different tongues and dialects are swarming from many different countries, many of them may dwell in these strange cities for decades and deliver their own cultures and languages as well.Together with this communication brought by international travelling , people would get accommodated with many other life styles. For example, you now can find many French wines in nearly every corner in the world, for travellers would ask for this beverage when they find they are available.But we can not neglect the disadvantages of this industry either. Many nationalities may be eliminated for this cultural expansion. They may try to learn something modern and finally lose their mother language, which may already be on the verge of extinction.
　　Another aspect of its advantages root from the economical part. Travelling means to spend much more than those days at home, and these money surely attracts many governments to appeal as many tourists as possible.However, we have to save some lag-behind economies as well,they may be weak before those investment from many other developed economies.
　　At the end of a day, we can list many other advantages and disadvantages in both culture and economy. But one thing we know for sure is that we can try our best to remove those disadvantages through hard work in cooperation and conciliation, we can also amplify our advantages after long years of persistence.

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