同等学力英语作文批改：第120期

　　同等学力英语作文原文

　　In recent years, more and more people raise pets, there are more problems about pets at the same time, such as:the spread of disease, environment pollution, children's safety. So some people think that the relevant departments of the state should be issued a series of effective measures to strictly control raising pets.

　　However, I think raising  pets have favorable hand. Based on the following reasons:

　　First,,now each family in society have only one child, so pet can become  their good friend.It reduces children's loneliness.

　　The second ,pet owners can help us to reduce the person's loneliness and adjust the person's mental health.

　　In short, as long as the guide, pet can reasonably be peace to human and  turn into human's good friends.

　　点评：8—10分

　　文章的结构不太，在段就应该把自己的观点表述出来，第二段论证，第三段总结。注意语法错误哦，加油。