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　　The robot is a machine after all

　　Three pictures describe an interesting story for us. The fist one shows that two peoples are playing the card game, one is a people, and another is a robot. The second shows that one people are repairing the robot. The third shows that the game continues when the robot is repaired well.

　　This story told us that intelligent robot will play important role in our life. Future robot will have very high intelligence, but it also need to repair and manage by people. Robot consists of a series of chins which are designed by human. it never exceed human.

　　Robot has many advantages. It is very well assistant in our work, and can work in duty, pollution, dangerous. It is very well partner in our life, and play game, entertainment with us. Future, we can explore more and more robot’s profit for us selves.

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　　文章结构还可以，段分析漫画的内容，第二段分析原因，也就是找论据支持题目中的论点，第三段总结。但是你的文章缺乏连贯性，需要衔接词。另外，注意语法错误，语法问题也是你失分的一个重要方面。加油啊。