1. This ain't a one-man deal， kid. You need to wise up and get yourself
a good crew chief and a good team.

    「翻译」这不是独角戏啊，孩子。你要放聪明点，给自己找一个一流的总机
师和伙伴。

    strawdog童鞋的作品：

    Alison老师的点评：

    Yeah， excellent！ Nice work. Take a quick look at the "L" sound though，
in words like "deal" and "yourself". The "L" sound is made by using the
tip of your tongue to put pressure on the back of your top front row of
teeth. Strong "L" sounds are really important in natural， native speech.

    （“L ”的发音很重要，大家注意要把舌尖放在上排牙齿的后面发音。）

    2. If some one loves a flower ， of which just one single blossom
grows in all the millions and millions of stars ， it is enough to make
him happy just to look at the stars.

    「翻译」如果有人爱上了在这亿万颗星星中独一无二的一株花，当他看着这
些星星的时候，这就足以使他感到幸福。

    janie1225 童鞋的作品：

    Alison老师的点评：

    Excellent work！ That was perfect ！ If I could give you six stars，
I would. Now you can work on speeding it up and making it more conversational.

    （鼓掌~ 灰常好的作品。可以加快些语速，更自然地运用到对话中去。）

    3. Don't ever let somebody tell you ， you can't do something. Not
even me.

    「翻译」别让别人告诉你，你成不了才。即使是我也不行。

    vanlentz童鞋的作品：

    Alison老师的点评：

    （很不错的作品哦~Alison 老师的建议是可以尝试不同的语音语调，增加些
个性的东东~ ）

    4. You got a dream， you gotta protect it. People can't do something
themselves， they wanna tell you you can't do it. If you want something，
go get it. Period.

    「翻译」如果你有梦想的话，就要去捍卫它。那些一事无成的人，想告诉你
你也成不了大器。如果你有理想的话，就要去努力实现，就这样。

    LukeJS童鞋的作品：

    Alison老师的点评：

    Excellent work. ：） I think the "L" sound is still bothering you
though， especially on the word "tell". Practice making strong and weak
"L" sounds with your tongue. The stronger the pressure of your tongue ，
the stronger the "L" sound. Remember that your tongue is pressing on the
back of your top front teeth.

    （这个也是“L ”的发音问题，大家千万记住发音时用舌尖抵上排牙齿，再
放开。）

    5. He said l would have to accept myself， my warts and all ， and
that we don't get to choose our warts. They are a part of us and we have
to live with them.

    「原句」他说我将不得不接受我自己，包括缺点以及一切，我们无法选择自
身的缺点，他们是我们的一部分，我们只能接纳。

    rock_jy 童鞋的作品：

    Alison老师的点评：

    （介位童鞋要注意的是“we have ”的读法，建议两个单词分开读，尽量读
得清晰些哦~ ）

    6. Great Halloween， everybody. I believe it was our most horrible
yet. Thank you， everyone.

    「翻译」伟大的万圣节。这是我们表现最恐怖的一次。谢谢大家。

    エイシュン君童鞋的作品：

    Alison老师的点评：

    Well your pronunciation was perfect ！ Now you can work on saying
it a little bit faster， at a more conversational speed. You never want
it to sound like you're reading something.：）

    （对于发音不错的童鞋来说，下面要做的就是加快语速，不要听起来像是在
读神马，自然些~ ）