2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(8)

　　第五章 实战演练——四级作文模拟训练及范文

　　模拟训练一

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

　　1.大学校园内各种证书的报考十分火热;

　　2.大学生考证的利弊;

　　3.考证面前，我的选择。

　　The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus

　　模拟训练二

　　Directions:

　　1. 上图所示为我国吸毒者年龄分布情况，请描述其变化;

　　2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因;

　　3. 这一变化对社会和个人的。

　　模拟训练三

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加，校园安全问题备受关注;

　　2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施。

　　Campus Security

　　参考范文

　　模拟训练一

　　【范文】

　　The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus

　　Recently, getting certificates has been brought into focus.The advertisements for training schools occupy a large proportion of the bulletin board, and booksellers fill their shelves with many reference books.And eager students spare their money and time for these courses and books.

　　Getting Certificates has been beneficial in several aspects.The most important one is that with more certificates, students have access to more and better job opportunities.In addition, they can make more contacts with the outside world in the course of getting certificates.However, every coin has two sides.The pursuit of certificates is no exception.Some students believe that the more certificates, the better it is.Getting certificates make the students become bookish easily.Some of them even neglect their routine learning in the process of getting certificates.

　　As for as I’m concerned, certificates certify students’ previous efforts.But whether these pieces of paper can benefit students or not, depends on what they have really gained.Therefore, before dazzling choices, we must have a clear attitude and scientific strategy, and then certificates are beneficial.

　　【点评】

　　文章以描述大学校园内各种证书的报考十分火热这一现象开始进入主题，逐步分析大学生考证的利弊，最后说明考证面前，我的选择。a large proportion of，make more contacts with，dazzling choices，have a clear attitude and scientific strategy等精彩句式的搭配使用，使文章增色不少。

　　模拟训练二

　　【范文】

　　On Drug Addicts

　　As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in the age distribution of drug addicts.To be concrete, the teenage addicts only made up 10 percent of all the drugsters in 1982 while the ratio rose up to 65 in 2002.

　　What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are three reasons.First, teenagers’ fearless curiosity about everything new has led some of them into this marsh.Second, many of the young addicts turned for the first time to drugs for escape either from their failure in the national entrance exams or from their parents’ breakup.And above all, our education in the harmfulness of drugs has been far from adequate to build teenagers’ sound resistance to drugs.To sum up, the causes mentioned above must call for more of our concern.

　　From the description above, we might have an overall understanding of the serious situation of drug addicts.For one thing, drug-taking does great damage to the health of drug users.For another, some drug users commit robbery or even murder their parents and relatives to get money to buy drugs, which poses a great threat to the social security and the social stability.Therefore, it is urgent for us to put an end to this trend.

　　【点评】

　　该预测题为社会热点话题，四级考试命题作文常考题材。本文属于图表作文的写作。根据四级图表作文命题规律，第一段文章描述了图表中所反映的我国吸毒者年龄的分布最近二十年的变化情况;第二段说明了产生这种变化的原因;最后一段陈述了吸毒无论是对个人的身体健康还是对社会的安全稳定都构成了巨大的威胁，并作出呼吁。文中亮点词汇有to be concrete，rose up to，call for more of our concern，have an overall understanding of，commit robbery，poses a great threat to，put an end to等等，为文章添彩。

　　模拟训练三

　　【范文】

　　Campus Security

　　Security issue may sound cliched, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously.Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away.A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying.In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

　　Above all, we students should strengthen our security awareness.Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately.In addition, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible.Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus.

　　As to me, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus.Therefore colleges and universities should exert their best efforts to make everyone on campus safe and sound.

　　【点评】

　　文章以描述校园安全出现的问题进入主题，逐步引申到应该及时采取措施，最后进行展望，提出号召。文章第二段使用On the one hand，On the other hand介绍解决问题的方法，使文章意思表达简洁明了。本文使用了一些精彩的语言及句式，例如：In such cases, what measures should be taken to…, strengthen our security awareness, exert their best efforts to, safe and sound等，使文章更具文采。