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　　The Robot Is a Machine after All

　　The cartoons story I read from newspaper resent impressed me deeply. One person played card to gamble money with a robot. However the robot won so much money from the person and the person was so upset. Then the person modified the software installed in the robot. As a result, by contrast the robot lost so much money. This story tells us that the robot is a machine after all which can’t do all things human being can do.

　　Human beings make increasing use of the robots in various fields with the development of scientific technology. As far as I know, firstly, the robots are used to do household works, such as cleaning, cooking and taking care of baby. Thereby people are released from the busy household works. Secondly, the robots also are assigned to replace human to work in the dangerous environment. Last but no least, the robots can do so much complicate science calculation works once we put in the software to their body.

　　Although the robots are smart with so much human’s intelligence so as to serve for people, they are controlled by humans, and can’t replace human. The cartoons story mentioned above illustrated my point well.

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