2014年考研英语作文:篇章的组织

　　在考研英语写作文时可以根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。

　　例如：

　　1.DIRECTIONS：

　　A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.

　　B. Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET II.

　　C. Your essay should meet the requirements below：

　　1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.

　　2. Give your comments

　　**谋篇分析

　　根据提纲中的信息1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.本文开头需要两个段落，即描述漫画段，引出暗含主题段。

　　根据提纲中的信息2. Give your comments本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即持有该观点的原因和比较后得出的结论

　　☆SAMPLE

　　As is shown in the cartoon， the hen that has just laid an egg is shouting， with her head raised high， “I ensure that my egg brings no corners and that it consists of such three parts as eggshell， egg white and yolk.”

　　What I‘ve mentioned above is the surface messages conveyed by the cartoon. It seems from the hen’s proud look that she is expected to make a promise for the egg she lays. It fact， it is clear that the hen promises what turns out to be her own duty.

　　There are some possible reasons for this common social phenomenon. For one thing， the social competition is becoming so fierce that all trades tend to produce ads to make themselves better known to the public. For another， they‘re not prepared to face the challenge and as a result， they can do little except declare their own duty as something praiseworthy.

　　In my opinion， every trade should try every means to improve its competitive forces instead of boasting like the hen in the cartoon. Therefore， I draw my conclusion that just as a hen shouldn‘t promise for her egg， so no trade in the society should boast themselves for something within their duty and that they should work hard to provide more benefits for the society. In a word， try not to be like the boasting hen in our life!

　　*根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。例如：

　　2.DIRECTIONS：

　　A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words.

　　B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEETⅡ。

　　C. Your essay should cover these three points：

　　l. effect of the country‘s growing human population on its wildlife

　　2. possible reason for the effect

　　3. your suggestion for wildlife protection

　　**谋篇分析

　　根据提纲中的信息l. effect of the country‘s growing human population on its wildlife本文开头需要两个段落，即描述漫画段，引出问题产生影响段。

　　根据提纲中的信息2. possible reason for the effect本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即持有该观点的原因。

　　根据提纲中的信息3. your suggestion for wildlife protection本篇文章结尾处体现出作者对该现象的评论，即改变这种现象的具体建议。

　　☆SAMPLE

　　As is shown from the first graph， the USA witnessed a rapid growth of population during the period of time from the year of 1800 to 1990. From the second graph， we can find out that there was a quicker and quicker rise in the number of species of wildlife no longer existing in the USA from 1600 to 1900， reaching 60 in all. It is obvious that the country‘s population explosion e xerted a great effect on its wildlife and resulted in the sharp decline in their number.

　　What caused the effect? There‘re at least two possible reasons provided here. In the first place， with the growth of population， there is more and more living space for humans and ， therefore， less and less for wildlife. Secondly， the large human population causes serious environmental pollution so that it is hard for wildlife to live in a clean and favorable surrounding. As a result， some rare animals become endangered and extinct. ( Here may be some other factors contributing to the declining tendency， but I think what has been mentioned above is generally acceptable. )

　　As far as I am concerned， my suggestions as to how to protect wildlife in the USA are as follows. First of all， the government should propagandize(宣传)/make efforts to arouse public awareness of the importance of wildlife protection. In the second place， the government should take effective measures to control the birthrate and prevent the environment from being polluted. Finally， excessive killing of animals should be banned by law. This is my point of view and I am sure my idea is both reasonable and workable.

　　*根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。例如：

　　3.DIRECTIONS：

　　·Study the following two pictures carefully and write and essay of at least 150 words.

　　·Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　·Your essay should meet the requirements below：

　　1. Describe the pictures.

　　2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the pictures.

　　3. Suggest counter-measures.

　　**谋篇分析

　　根据提纲中的信息1. Describe the pictures.本文开头需要一个独立的段落，即描述漫画段。

　　根据提纲中的信息2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the pictures.本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即漫画人画这幅漫画的目的。

　　根据提纲中的信息3. Suggest counter-measures.本篇文章结尾处要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即解决这种问题的具体措施。