新东方：2012年考研《英语》作文套路

      2012考研报道：考后首发2012年考研真题及答案解析

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阐释寓意段	☆	☆	☆1	☆	☆	☆	☆	☆	☆	☆
解决问题段	☆	☆	☆3		☆		☆	☆		☆
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　　一、图画描述段

　　主要原则：

　　简单化原则零错误原则 纯原则 语法结构：定语从句+插入语

　　描述图画的形容词thought-provoking/compelling/profound/instructive/enlightening

　　1.The satirical sketch graphically portrays a scene in which ______________________

　　It is graphically/vividly/symbolically illustrated/demonstrated in the 图 that___________

　　2.1) What makes the drawing striking/intriguing/compelling is the fact that __________

　　2) The most striking feature of the drawing is (the fact)that ____________________

　　3) As is symbolically depicted in the (first/left-handed)图，____________________

　　3.其他描写

　　4.字幕 1) We are informed by the caption that “____________________________”

　　2) The caption reads “___________”/The caption indicates that “___________”

　　5.总结(不要用太难的表达，把图总结即可，不一定需要)

　　Undoubtedly/Unquestionably/Incontrovertibly/Indisputably______________________________

　　三大套路

　　1.Ving的处理

　　1)Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed, “May time pass on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”

　　2) Fluttering through the air, we dance wing to wing, life after life, forever a pair.

　　2. ADJ+N

　　3. =with+N

　　With passion/difficulty/optimism/confidence/joy/enthusiasm/grief/sorrow…..

　　单图：2008 合作

　　The impressive and thought-provoking cartoon graphically portrays a moving scene invoving two handicapped men. (Depicted in the thought-provoking cartoon are two handicapped men.) The most striking feature of the drawing is that the two cripples, leaving their crutches behind and supporting each other with their powerful hands, are walking forward with confidence and optimism. In addtion, we are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.”

　　As is illustrated in the thought-provoking cartoon, an optimistic and confident man, taking off his clothes, is rushing toward on a bridge from “poverty” to “prosperity”. What makes the drawing intriguing is that the bridge is entitled/ marked as “reasonable system”. Unquestionably, it is the positive politics that has bridged the gap between the poor and the rich.

　　双图：2006 小贝头

　　As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the handsome British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among young people. In the first photo, Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face. The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face. In the second photo, this young man is doing Beckham’s chic hairstyle in a barbershop. We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol’s hairdo.

　二、阐述段

　　天龙八部 三分天下

　　食品安全问题

　　到底什么是天龙八部? 简单理解，就是八个可以在第二段当中构思的方面。第二段比较好是总分总的夹心式写法。其中比较比较比较关键的是现状分析，原因分析和后果分析。注意到，这八个方面是可以构思的方面，不是要都写，都写的话，这一段一般人过200，高手过1000. P2注意尽量控制在6-7句以内.

　　1.由浅入深：Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.

　　2.深层含义：Undoubtedly, the purpose of the picture is to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.

　　3.现状(罗列除了很多可以参考的写法)

　　1)The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing/increasing/expanding/mounting numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food.

　　2)The unprecedented economic development over the past several years is accompanied by the dramatic increase of unsafe food.

　　3)We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors, all of which are sounding an alarm to our society.

　　4.原因(写一条就可以，不写也没问题，但是要让文章显得有深度比较好分析一下原因)

　　1). 人们为了追求利润，而丧失了道德底线

　　2). 国家监管不力，相关法律并未完善，给了不法分子漏洞

　　3). 万能BT理由，社会压力巨大。(with the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals.)

　　1)Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon.

　　2)The reason for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent, ascribe it to the following interrelated factors. (1，2两句作用相同，都是引出两条原因。注意没必要两条，一条就够，两条主要是为了层次感)

　　3)具体的两条理由，On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to /totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business.

　　On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating.

　　(*)现状+原因(单原因)(其中还有象征点的写法出现)

　　The irresponsible teacher depicted in the picture is naturally associated with a great number of professors in real life, who are only in pursuit of their research papers and titles, while totally turning a blind eye to their obligation as qualified educators, for the reason that a great number of colleges and universities regard the number of papers as an essential standard to judge a teacher.

　　5.后果/影响

　　Professional dishonesty not only adversely affects the health condition of numerous consumers, but also poses a probable and potential threat on social stability.

　　坏：1.Adversely affect

　　2.pose a probable and potential threat on

　　3.exert a(n) unfavorable/undesirable/adverse/negative consequence on

　　4.sound an alarm to

　　5. put an enormous pressure upon

　　好：1.Lay a solid foundation for

　　2.exert a(n) positive/favorable/far-reaching/beneficial impact on

　　3.play a(n) vital/crucial/irreplaceable role in

　　4.serve as a catalyst for

　　教授的职责：The indifferent attitude towards education not only undermines the teaching quality of universities and adversely affects students’ desire for knowledge, but also sounds an alarm to education system in contemporary society.

　　Undeniably, this phenomenon will reduce the education quality. And students on the other hand, will have no specific and professional instruction.

　　6.举例说明 It can be best exemplified by the case of poisonous milk and other dangerous food.(其实就是联系实际，也可以说就是现状的具体体现)

　　参考：2006：小贝头

　　Undoubtedly, the photos have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the youth nowadays. Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans. Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols. Generally speaking, young people are inclined to adore the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.

　　7.层进的修辞手法和转折的运用

　　It is undeniable that we must be honest, which should be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared (advocated) by all the businessmen. Regrettably/However, it is ruthlessly and relentlessly ignored in contemporary society.

　　8.威胁性总结

　　If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse/ the whole market even the entire society would become unimaginable and uncontrollable/ the whole market even the entire society would become uncurbed.

　　增补：虚拟语气版：

　　Were the situation to continue, it would become uncontrollable.

　　考研第二段就是以上内容的合理整合，加上第一句的论点

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.

　　和比较后一句的结论(威胁性总结)If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　中间插入3-4句论据即可，成为一个夹心式的写法。一定不能写太多，第二段控制在5--6句，7句冲顶。

　　版本一 论点+原因+结论(黑字是第二段首尾，几个版本都不变，其他是根据刚才的分析加入的论据)

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon. On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business. On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　版本二：论点+现状+层进+结论

　　头尾两句不变

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food. We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors. There is no denying the fact that the virtue of honesty should be accepted, appreciated and advocated by all the businessmen. Regrettably, the current situation is incompatible with this ideal concept. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.(比较后一句可省，因为太长了)

　　版本三：论点+后果+结论

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. Professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. Initially, they adversely affect the health condition of numerous consumers, for the reason that consumers can not easily recognize them. Additionally, fake goods pose a probable and potential threat on our national economy, because/as consumers do not believe the market system. In other words, this phenomenon will undermine the whole business. Finally, we have business with foreign countries. If fake goods are discovered in the overseas trade, it will undoubtedly exert a negative influence on our reputation. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.(比较后一句可省，因为太长了)

　　版本四：论点+现状+一点原因+一点后果+结论

　　1) Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. 2)We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk and eggs, because a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to the basic morality of the whole business. 3)In other words, professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. 4)If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　1) 是深刻含义; 2)是现状+一点原因; 3)是后果; 4)是威胁性总结

　　西部大开发

　　1. 由浅入深Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.

　　2. 深刻含义Undoubtedly, this picture is thought-provoking, in that it endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue.

　　3. 现状：The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign.

　　或：The past several years have witnessed the increasing/soaring passion (enthusiasm) of people to join in the process. 补充：参与/投身于 的其他写法 be engaged in devote oneself in

　　4. 原因：

　　1) 东西部差异大，东部很多人生活富裕，而西部一些地区仍然贫穷

　　2) 这是和谐社会共同发展的需要。

　　3)BT理由，压力巨大。(稍微改写下，西部压力大就可以了)

　　这里暂且写一条：Some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty.

　　5. 影响

　　1)可以有效解决东西部发展不均衡的问题

　　2)极大提高西部人民的生活水平

　　3)可以提高西部人民的教育文化水平

　　一个词：深远!

　　The movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. It can not only alleviate (减轻缓和，不会的话换relieve) the poverty of the underdeveloped areas, but also lay a solid foundation for the education level of the region effectively and efficiently.

　　6. 层进 西部大开发应该被accepted, appreciated and advocated.

　　7. 反面论证：要是国家不注意均衡发展，只顾东部，整个国家就会。

　　Suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)

　　或者正面总结：Generally speaking, the phenomenon would continue to exert a beneficial influence on our society, if it is widely accepted, appreciated and advocated.

　　注：本文并未采用举例说明的论证手段

　　三分天下法：

　　Undoubtedly, the subtle connotation of the picture endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue. (论点)The drawing is thought-provoking, in that it contains three layers of profound meaning. (过渡句)Initially, the past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign. Additionally, some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty. Finally, the movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. Generally speaking, suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)(结论)

　　总共6句话

　　第一句仍然直接说出深层含义(由浅入深的写法确实是比较弱智)

　　第二句是关键：这是一句过渡句，提示阅卷人，我接下来要分三点来分析这个问题，自己制造这句话，可以避免模板同时还可以提示脉络同时还可以顺便凑个字数

　　例句如下：

　　1. This picture is thought-provoking in that it conveys the following three layers of subtle connotations.

　　2. The subtle implication can be analyzed in the following three interrelated aspects.

　　3. In order to derive profound implication from it, we can dissect this enlightening picture in the following three aspects.

　　以上三句话的意思无非就是：考官注意啊，我要写三点了!

　　然后开始写自己的1，2，3每点一句话(当然如果你可以多写几句也不是问题，控制时间就OK)

　　第三句是第一点，initially/to begin with/first and foremost

　　第四句是第二点，additionally/what’s more/moreover/furthermore

　　第五句是第三点，finally/last but not least

　　至于比较后一句第六句，以前怎么总结，现在还怎么总结，注意关联词Generally speaking。

　2008年：合作

　　【审题构思】

　　第一段解析：这是一道单图题。图画中是两个都只有一条腿的人，丢开了拐杖，互相搀扶着往前走。 文字说明：“你一条腿，我一条腿;你我一起，走南闯北。” 根据我们课堂的讲解，单图题第一段写3句。图画描述应有两句，挖掘两个可写点，串成两句简单描述即可。比较后一句可以对图画进行挖掘后总结，比如“他们有了互相的帮助，自信而乐观的迎接着挑战”(Undoubtedly, with each other’s help, they are embracing the upcoming challenges with confidence and optimism) 也可以对文字说明进行简单翻译，也就是我们课堂解释过的The caption reads/indicates,或者We are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.” 比较后一句还可以简单发表评论，说明合作的重要性，但第一段始终是描述段，对深刻含义的评论不宜过多，一句即可，否则跑题。

　　不少考生反映，这一段比较难的写的是“拐杖”这个词语。Crutch 对于考研的同学来说属于极其生僻的词语，改卷者也明白这个道理。只要你把这个意思表达出来就可以了，我们一直强调“第一秒写不出，第二秒换说法”，这里可以写为Supporting tools/assistant equipment/supporting sticks等等。

　　第二段解析：根据我们一直讲解的“天龙八部”写法，第二段应满足总分总的写法(或者是总分)。第一句要点明蕴涵在简单图画中的大道理，作为全段的主题句(论点)，结尾比较好以Generally speaking之类的关联词总结全段(结论)。中间的论据我们可以选择事实和现状描述，问题背景，原因或后果，层进，举例说明。可以分析现代社会合作的原因和必要性，可以描述合作在各个领域里的现状(如个人层面，企业层面，社会层面)，可以讨论合作的好处，可以联系实际，举例说明合作的重要性。论点一句，论据4-5句，结论一句，第二段6-7句。

　　第三段解析：注意到提纲规定是“comments”。我们曾经对这个词进行过深入分析，水平高的同学可以自己发表议论，水平一般的人，可以把comments理解为suggestions, 于是回到我们比较熟悉的建议措施段，坏事当然提建议，好事也可以提出建议，使其变得更好。在这一段里，主题句一句，从意义过渡到建议上来;具体评论或措施2句，写出层次感;总结加展望未来一句，第三段4句。注意：考研写作的观点并无对错之分，只要不跑题即可。06年可以写追星的负面意义，也可以正面挖掘积极方面;07年可以写为自信，也可以写为挑战，人生意义。08年的写作，写为合作，互相帮助，困难中互相扶持均属合理。在考研写作三大要素语言结构思路里，思路始终是次要的。关键是语言基本正确，结构清晰，逻辑严谨。

　　【参考范文】

　　The impressive and thought-provoking cartoon graphically portrays a moving scene invoving two handicapped men. The most striking feature of the drawing is that the two cripples, leaving their crutches behind and supporting each other with their powerful hands, are walking forward with confidence and optimism. In addtion, we are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.”

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to inform us that due attention has to be paid to the issue of cooperation, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. On account of the quickening pace of life, unprecedented competition in all walks of life makes it difficult for a single individual to finish an arduous task all by himself. The past several years have witnessed the increase of collaboration both academically and professionally. On the one hand, scholars and scientists benefit considerably from the coordinate efforts among a variety of universities. On the other hand, teamwork among different companies exerts an undeniably far-reaching impact on their development. Generally speaking, if we were isolated from the society, we would feel desperate in the ruthless and relentless competition.

　　Accordingly, it is imperative for us to derive positive implications from the profound picture. For one thing, we should be educated and enlightened to enhance the awareness of cooperation. For another, we can take advantage of the advanced science and technology to help us work with others effectively and efficiently. It is in this way that we can make our society develop in a prosperous, harmonious and dynamic direction.

　　2009年：网络的近与远

　　天龙八部之坏事版

　　Apparently, the purpose of the sketch is to convince us that considerable emphasis has to be placed upon the issue of Internet communication, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. Nobody could have failed to notice the fact people in increasing numbers are addicted to the cyber world, for the reason that surfing on line can provide them with fascination and recreation. Regrettably, we are so obsessed with the virtual world that we almost turn a blind eye to the real interpersonal communication around us, which not only poses a potential and probable threat on our normal contact with other people, but also makes our life isolated. Generally speaking, hardly can we maintain physical and psychological health if we were deprived of social communication.

　　4句话。第一句点明主旨：网络交流问题

　　第二句现状+原因分析：很多人沉迷于网络世界，因为网络的诱惑和娱乐。

　　第三句转折+结果：我们太迷恋而忽视了人际交往，这样对正常交流不好，也让我们隔绝开来

　　第四句威胁性总结

　　三分天下之坏事版

　　Apparently, the purpose of the sketch is to convince us that considerable emphasis has to be placed upon the issue of Internet communication, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. This picture is thought-provoking, in that it contains the following three layers of meanings. Initially, nobody could have failed to notice the fact people in increasing numbers are addicted to the cyber world, for the reason that surfing on line can provide them with fascination and recreation. Additionally, we are so obsessed with the virtual world that we almost turn a blind eye to the real interpersonal communication around us. Finally, hardly can we maintain close contact with people, both individually and socially, if we fail to attach great importance to social communication.

　　5句话。第一句深刻含义

　　第二句过渡句

　　第三四五句分论点1，2，3

　　双刃剑版

　　Apparently, the picture is a metaphor of a thought-provoking phenomenon: the Internet is a double-edged sword. (On the one hand)The past several years are accompanied by unprecedented development of the Internet, and people in mounting numbers are benefiting from its amazing convenience in communication. It can be aptly exemplified by the effective and efficient “chatting tools(softwares)” ranging from QQ to MSN. Regrettably(On the other hand), unable to resist the fascination and temptation of the cyber world, a great number of people fail to notice the importance of social activities and interpersonal communication. If we let the situation go as it is, the phenomenon would become unimaginable and uncontrollable/people would suffer from severe communication crisis.

　　5句话

　　第一句点明主旨双刃剑。

　　第二句说明网络发展对交流的好处--拉近我们的距离

　　第三句举例说明好处(2，3两句是正面描述)

　　第四句说明沉迷网络缺乏交流的现状

　　第五句威胁性说明网络的坏处--拉远了我们的距离(交流危机)(4，5两句是反面描述)

　　三、建议措施段/评论看法段

　　1. 国家立法 2 人民教育/唤起意识 3 媒体宣传 4. 自己做起 5. 自由发挥

　　Accordingly, it is imperative for us to derive positive implications from the profound picture. For one thing, we should be educated and enlightened to enhance the awareness of cooperation. For another, we can take advantage of the advanced science and technology to help us work with others effectively and efficiently. It is in this way that we can make our society prosperous, harmonious and vigorous.

　　四、举例论证段(2001，2004，2007)

　　A case in point is the successful launching of “Shenzhou Ⅴ spacecraft” which sets Chinain a high position of aviation and space flight. Although it means a great achievement for us Chinese, we are facing new challenges in the future and need to do further research in space technology. Another illustration is closely related to us, the examinees. If we pass this test and are fortunately admitted by a university, we shall not stop making efforts. Instead, we are confronted with the challenge of conquering the difficult graduate courses. We still have to strive for success in our future academic study, employment and career. On the whole, these examples effectively clarify the saying that “Destination is another starting point.”

　　十大话题：

　　一.人口问题

　　二.西部大开发

　　三.网络和双刃剑(金钱，阳光)

　　四.成功，梦想和现实

　　五.职业选择和规划/高分低能

　　六.洋节和传统节日

　　七.神七上天和嫦娥奔月

　　八.地震与爱心

　　九.奥运举办

　　十.抄袭与诚信

　　补充题目：伪劣商品;食品安全;抄袭与诚信;乱收费(因果：因：法律制度不完善，部分人只顾自己利益，忽视学生利益; 果：为社会，个人带来不良后果和巨大压力)节俭与压力;心理问题;交通阻塞

　　从现状(实际生活例子)，原因，结果(后果或者影响), 建议措施四大方向来分析

　　小作文部分

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　　2006年真题解析

　　You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

　　Don't sign your own name...."Li Ming" instead. Don't write the address.

　　To whom it may concern,

　　I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long period, I write this letter to request your help to recommend a candidate.

　　I wonder if it is convenient for you if two things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First, the child should come from Gui Zhou Province because I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second, it will be better if the child is a primary school student. Actually, I am good at teaching mathematics at elementary level.

　　My plan will be carried out as follows. First, I will remit at least 300 yuan in cash every month so as to reduce the financial burden of the family. More importantly, I decide to teach the child math and English in person during my summer vacation, which will surely be more beneficial to the child.

　　I really appreciate your help, and I look forward to your reply as soon as possible.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　感谢信

　　Directions:

　　Your delegation (代表团)has just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain. And you were warmly treated there by Professor Herthwell. Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality and hope for further cooperation.

　　Dear Prof. Herthwell, (告诉了名字，又知道是教授，比较好这么称呼)

　　I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for your kind hospitality you showed to our delegation during our visit in your university.(写信意图：感谢对方的热情招待)

　　I am indebted to your generous help to our visit. It was nice of you to introduce me to so many of your famous professors at your university. In addition, we appreciate the accommodation you provided for us. We had a fantastic time in Britain and will never forget it. (感激内容：鉴于这是感谢信，内容发生在过去，在这里套用I would be grateful if you would take …into consideration是不太合适的。用关联词1，2，3也显得呆板。于是调整了一下，大意是：

　　我感激你的慷慨帮助。你介绍了很多教授给我认识。另外，(IN ADDITION，不用1，2，3了)，提供的住宿很好，我们很爽，绝对不会忘记)(注意时态)

　　Meanwhile, I hope you will someday pay a short visit to our university and give us some lectures on “Modern Western Economics”. (这句是提纲要求 hope for further cooperation.不写的话严重扣分) (或者I would be grateful if you would pay a short visit to our university)If you have interest in our university, please feel free to contact me for more information.

　　Yours Sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　段落句子分布详情

　　1-4-2 总共7句，113字，已经超纲

　　询问信

　　Directions: You want to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter to ask about the situation there as regards what qualifications one needs for acceptance, fees, possible scholarships, and accommodation.

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.

　　First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I have already had a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation?

　　I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　推荐信

　　To whom it may concern,

　　As the director of Philosophy Department, I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends, Mark. Eros, to your distinguished department.

　　I would be grateful if you would be interested to know his details via this letter. Firstly, …What’s more….Last but not least……

　　Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for your position. If you have any questions concerning his background, please feel free to contact me for more information.

　　备忘录/报告(MEMO)：备忘录在本质上也是书信，一般是写给同事的一种正式而简短的信，常常是有关工作事宜等。它的主体部分和书信几乎一样，只是省略其中的礼貌结尾。同时，MEMO不需要结束语和签名。(但结尾可以写If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information.)

　　写作格式：

　　Date: 日期 如September 12, 2001

　　To：收件人

　　From: 发件人

　　Subject：事由，如Faculty Meeting

　　范文：Directions:

　　You are an active member of the student newspaper. The newspaper is currently looking for a journalist for the summer semester. Write a memo that will appear in the newspaper next week describing the position available.

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　提纲分析：没有具体的提纲要求，中间完全自己发挥。

　　P1：写作目的：招人

　　P2：具体细节：展开2-3点。三点比较好，每点一句即可。可以从以下方面展开：

　　1)招聘条件 2)上班时间 3)工作任务 4)薪水待遇 5)培训机会

　　Date: August 10, 2004

　　To: All students

　　From: Li Ming

　　Subject: Journalist Position Available for the Summer Semester

　　On behalf of the students newspaper, I am writing this MEMO to inform you that we are going to recruit a new staff. And the details are listed as follows.(写作意图/写此MEMO的目的)(2句，30字)

　　Firstly, Applicants should currently be studying at the university, and should preferably have at least two years’ writing experience. Secondly, the successful applicant will be expected to write two articles every week on happenings in the city and on campus. Finally, the position will commence at the end of May and will last through to the end of August. (3句，59字)

　　If you are interested, please send your resume to the campus newspaper office. (OR: If you have any questions concerning the position/application, please feel free to contact me for more information.)(1句，13字)

　　公告/告示

　　1.标题(Announcement或者具体活动)放中间

　　2.写作日期位于标题下一行，右顶格

　　3.无须称呼结尾礼貌语，但可以写If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information. 而且要署名，一般是机构，题目会告之

　　Your university, Xinhua University, is going to celebrate its 60th anniversary. Write an announcement which covers the following information.

　　1) opening and closing dates of the celebrations,

　　2) celebration activities,

　　3) an invitation to all the past students, and

　　4) ways to contact .

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the announcement. Use Xinhua University at the end of the announcement. You should write about 100 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (10 points)

　　提纲分析：

　　P1：公告/活动目的

　　P2： 活动细节 1。时间(提纲1)2。活动(提纲2)(比较好自己再发挥一点)

　　P3：邀请+联系(提纲3，4)

　　Announcement

　　January 19, 2008

　　A month-long anniversary celebration will be held at Xinhua University, to salute its 60th anniversary. And the details of the activity are listed as follows.

　　Firstly, it will start/commence from September 16th, 2005 and continue to October. 15th, 2005. Secondly, seminars, cultural and athletic sports activities, and many other programs are planned to mark this glorious occasion of the university. Finally, our mayor will be present to make a speech too.

　　Hereby(特此，很经典) we sincerely invite all our alumni to be present to share these happiest hours of the school. If you have any questions, you are most welcome to contact us at 010-89766789 or email us at xinhuauniv@edu.com.cn. (OR: If you have any questions, you are most welcome to contact us for more information.)

　　Xinhua University

　　总结：不管如何，MEMO和公告的共同点是：

　　P1：活动/事件目的+And the details of the activity are listed as follows.

　　P2：细节的安排 改写提纲+合理扩展 写三点

　　P3：问题联系方式If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information.