2011年考研英语作文写作指导：阐述段

阐述段 天龙八部 三分天下

　　食品安全问题

　　到底什么是天龙八部? 简单理解，就是八个可以在第二段当中构思的方面。第二段比较好是总分总的夹心式写法。其中比较比较比较关键的是现状分析，原因分析和后果分析。注意到，这八个方面是可以构思的方面，不是要都写，都写的话，这一段一般人过200，高手过1000. P2注意尽量控制在6-7句以内.

　　1.由浅入深：Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.

　　2.深层含义：Undoubtedly, the purpose of the picture is to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.

　　3.现状(罗列除了很多可以参考的写法)

　　1)The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing/increasing/expanding/mounting numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food.

　　2)The unprecedented economic development over the past several years is accompanied by the dramatic increase of unsafe food.

　　3)We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors, all of which are sounding an alarm to our society.

　　4.原因(写一条就可以，不写也没问题，但是要让文章显得有深度比较好分析一下原因)

　　1). 人们为了追求利润，而丧失了道德底线

　　2). 国家监管不力，相关法律并未完善，给了不法分子漏洞

　　3). 万能BT理由，社会压力巨大。(with the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals.)

　　1)Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon.

　　2)The reason for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent, ascribe it to the following interrelated factors. (1，2两句作用相同，都是引出两条原因。注意没必要两条，一条就够，两条主要是为了层次感)

　　3)具体的两条理由，On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to /totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business.

　　On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating.

　　(*)现状+原因(单原因)(其中还有象征点的写法出现)

　　The irresponsible teacher depicted in the picture is naturally associated with a great number of professors in real life, who are only in pursuit of their research papers and titles, while totally turning a blind eye to their obligation as qualified educators, for the reason that a great number of colleges and universities regard the number of papers as an essential standard to judge a teacher.

　　5.后果/影响

　　Professional dishonesty not only adversely affects the health condition of numerous consumers, but also poses a probable and potential threat on social stability.

　　坏：1.Adversely affect

　　2.pose a probable and potential threat on

　　3.exert a(n) unfavorable/undesirable/adverse/negative consequence on

　　4.sound an alarm to

　　5. put an enormous pressure upon

　　好：1.Lay a solid foundation for

　　2.exert a(n) positive/favorable/far-reaching/beneficial impact on

　　3.play a(n) vital/crucial/irreplaceable role in

　　4.serve as a catalyst for

　　教授的职责：The indifferent attitude towards education not only undermines the teaching quality of universities and adversely affects students’ desire for knowledge, but also sounds an alarm to education system in contemporary society.

　　Undeniably, this phenomenon will reduce the education quality. And students on the other hand, will have no specific and professional instruction.